As I walked into the room my legs were jello. My vision is doubled and my heartbeat quickens. I’m too scared to even look in the corner of the room, even looking behind me is impossible. It's like I have broken my neck and I can’t turn it. My lungs are frozen, it's like I have inhaled water. Then it happens. I see him. I freeze. I want to run but I can't. My heart is in my stomach. It's horrible. Then I unfreeze, my legs collapse like a building in an earthquake. The struggle of trying to get up is impossible. I see the tall dark figure walk towards me. I know this is the end. I close my eyes and willingly let him take my life.
Hello, Kia ora, Привет, 你好, Hallo, こんにちは.
Our Learning Intention this week was to deepen our understanding of descriptive language by creating feelings for our reader, such as empathy. We also looked into the effects of short sentences. We got our ideas from the movie Marley and me which made us feel sad.
kia ora Lucas i liked how you added as much detail you could your really good at writing.
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