The engines roaring like a lion asserting its dominance. My ears are starting to pop then it happens the pop sounds like a gun shot. The doors open and the instructor calls me over the regret and the anxiousness kicks in. The countdown begins then we jump the feeling of falling is a weird sensation the air is thin like a piece of paper and it's hard to breathe. The parachute pulls and then there was a sigh of relief. The ground was slowly getting closer but then I heard a rip...
This is my story I did for writing on what it would feel like to go skydiving. Can you please give me some ideas on how to finish the story. I hope you enjoy.
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