In this blog post I do a mood map on the story hitting the target. The whole point of this activity is to learn the mood created by a key event in a story. Hope you enjoy
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Tuesday, August 3, 2021
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Ciao Lucas
ReplyDeleteI loved your work because you put in deatil and effort and you just spent your hole entire time working on this nice job. I liked how you talked about why you did it and what it was for nice work this is amazing hope you do more. Next time you could make it bigger so we can see all the words at once.
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Salut! Lucas,
ReplyDeleteI really like the descriptive short sentences in this.
Maybe next time you could add an image.
Nice job!
Kind Regards, Darion
hello lucus i really like you blog post on hitting the target maybe next time you could add some photos on this story but good job
ReplyDeleteKia ora Lucas, This is amazing because all the detail you used and put alot of effort in. Maybe next time you could make it a bit easier to read (But I do know that it is sort of a glitch) I also love the descriptive words you used in your writing & maybe next time you could add an image.
ReplyDeleteSincerly-Josh